I need help with a unique thesis statement on the topic child abuse
This was my original thesis statement
Community and social factors such as gender and social inequality, easy availability of alcohol and drugs, and high unemployment levels have increased the rate of child abuse.
However this is what my teacher wrote
Think about specifics for this statement and review past research to identify a “future studies” and limitations from past studies. This action may bring more specifics to your topic.
Students are to list the various databases and other sources utilized in their search for information on their topic. Students are to include their thesis statement in the first line of their post. Then, share with their classmates at least 2 helpful hints they feel will aid them in their search for information. Also, students are to be sure to post any difficulties they have found in searching for information.
This was my original thesis statement
Community and social factors such as gender and social inequality, easy availability of alcohol and drugs, and high unemployment levels have increased the rate of child abuse.
However this is what my teacher wrote
Think about specifics for this statement and review past research to identify a “future studies” and limitations from past studies. This action may bring more specifics to your topic.
Students are to list the various databases and other sources utilized in their search for information on their topic. Students are to include their thesis statement in the first line of their post. Then, share with their classmates at least 2 helpful hints they feel will aid them in their search for information. Also, students are to be sure to post any difficulties they have found in searching for information.
